After some critical feedback from my teacher and some more extensive research, I concluded that the main image should be changed to a more straight/head on shot as this is a more powerful and strong shot used in magazines. Therefore, I took another shot of the protagonist in this shot with the intense emotion and replaced the original main image, I used the same technique as I did the previous image for the effects. Also, I decided to move the sell lines (on the right hand-side) and barcode more over to the edge of the magazine while making them slightly bigger. Finally, I made the banner images all the same size as this would add to the professionalism of the magazine.
